Thursday 17 May 2012

Cry of the Taniwha - Chapter 22

WALT: Read and Proof Read Our Writing.
1. Describe this chapter
2. Reflect on this week's literacy using a PMI - the good, the bad and the interesting

1. This chapter was thrilling and exciting. In this chapter Eve is held hostage to Diz and Skulla's fist and if Matt doesn't find the Rothery Stone she will get hit. They find the Rothery Stone, and then when Diz is trying to find his diamond and Skulla is hypothesised to his, the ground exploded into mud and Jackson got badly burnt from the blast.

2.
P - The Good
* The Explosion - Descriptive
* When they found The Rothery Stone - Exciting
* Holding Eve hostage - Thrilling

M - the Bad
* When they took them to the Mud Pool - Weak Description

I - The Interesting
* The Ending - Cliff Hanger Really Good

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