Thursday 18 October 2012

Diamante Poem ☺

War
Murderous, Brutal
Agonizing, Shooting, Destroying
Dying Soliders Final Breath
Killing, Struggling, Bombarding
Bloodshed, Hostel
Peace
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5 comments:

  1. -_-j3$$ie^_^18 October 2012 at 13:52

    I like how your poem has feeling in the middle its really interesting.

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  2. Hannah's Blog18 October 2012 at 13:55

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  3. $H@NI@H -_-18 October 2012 at 13:56

    I like your poem because of the word peace and because it is the opposite of war. -_-

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  4. Hannah's Blog18 October 2012 at 13:57

    Amazing Language KATE!!! ☺

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  5. AmyA18 October 2012 at 14:30

    I like how you have add lots of descriptive words

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